I feel trust and mistrust The way dogs see a scent trail The way pigeons see home
He walks with broken hips That sway like birch trees After a tempest that undermines the vines if the earth Holds his mouth ready for betrayal
She blinked like a moment in a dream Where the sun went out for a few seconds Like a threat. I don't watch her hands They are scoundrels, all solid hair oil And paper smiles.
They cannot hide from those moorings Revealing their intent like a rotten fruit Sour and foaming. I feel danger The gift of hurt, over and over Too young to be this afraid Vigilance is a rusty key
I see each soul, taste intent Like a dark necromancer, bringing supposition back from rest There is no way to hide from me There is no way to hide from myself.
Thanks! I’m trying to destabilise the notion of the obvious reply to a prompt, because I feel that creates an echo chamber of responses that don’t grasp at the glorious diversity that the form of writing can offer
I love when someone blows my mind with a totally unexpected response to a prompt. You’ve done it!
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Thanks! I’m trying to destabilise the notion of the obvious reply to a prompt, because I feel that creates an echo chamber of responses that don’t grasp at the glorious diversity that the form of writing can offer
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Very well put!
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